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In English

Enviado: 10 Jun 2012, 02:21
por PesTuga
Boas, pessoal, sim é verdade é mais um marmanjo a escrever. :sorridente:

Decidi partilhar aqui com vocês os meus textos, faço de vez em quando, e de ver o Kakerlakk a partilhar os deles, deu-me vontade de partilhar aqui os meus textos, por português, não me gosto de exprimir muito, mas gosto de o fazer pela Língua Inglesa.

Obrigado, pelo vosso tempo, só de lerem isto. :)

Blind for Love
Spoiler
I felt alone, someday...
That day, it was bad, to be me.
I can't believe what i saw, it was a big betray.
The hate, and the passion and the disagree.

I was safe but I felt hurt inside.
The tears started to pour...
My life was in ruins and the shame I hide.
I tried to put a smile on my face, but that wasn't the cure.

That women, was my perdition...
How was I capable to love her?
I don't know, but i felt in my direction.
I was blind, but that love to me, was just plain pure.

I open my eyes and i realised, what i've done.
I give it all, but it wasn't enough for her.
Was too late? No, because she wasn't the one.
I didn't felt the time go by, but for me that was all sure.
Mind is Crazy...
Spoiler
I guess if I was boring they would love me more...
Guess if I was simple in the mind.
Everything would be fine.
Maybe if I was jerk to girls.
Instead of being nice and speakin kind words.
Then maybe it would be ok to say then.
I wasnt a good guy to begin with...
But my mind is all crazy, crazy, crazy.
You and Me
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I thought someday, it was only going to be me and you.
But I was wrong, that wasn't our destiny.
Our faith wasn't bright, but i didn't knew that yet.
I considered you as my best friend for too long.
I didn't knew, what I was getting in too.
I gave you my all, but for you that wasn't enough.
I was sad, head down, low spirit...
Cry was my possibility, and in that moment, my proud didn't got me.
I cried for you, I admit it. That wasn't me, but sometimes you do things, you don't even know why.
I didn't feel bad, because that was right to do, but not for her, she didn't deserved it.
I was sick and tired, of being your friendly shoulder, and getting nothing in return, neither your kind words.
I thought I need forever, but happily I was wrong.
You're nothing to me now, I don't want you to be bad, because I don't hate you...
But now, i'm better without you, and you were my past, you're not my present and neither my future.
One day, I hope that you understand what I meant to you, like you meant to me.
But in that day, in that hour, in that minute, in that couple of seconds.
It's all going to be too late...

Re: My Written in English

Enviado: 10 Jun 2012, 02:28
por Kakerlakk
Acho que fizeste muito bem em ser "mais um marmanjo a escrever", amigo. :)

O teu texto está impecável e retrata na perfeição um sentimento que temos, pelo menos uma vez na vida.

Muitos parabéns e continua! ;)

Re: In English

Enviado: 10 Jun 2012, 23:23
por henras sc
Muito bom o texto, aguardo mais.

P.s. Agora percebo porque os teus estados do face são em inglês.

Re: In English

Enviado: 11 Jun 2012, 23:53
por PesTuga
Mais um pequenino texto no 1ºpost. ;)

Re: In English

Enviado: 12 Jun 2012, 00:19
por henras sc
Gostei, mas vê lá se começas a meter com a tradução(sem translate do google) que eu não percebi algumas coisas do 1º.
Temos poeta? :D

Agora vai comentar os meus. :oops:

Re: In English

Enviado: 12 Jun 2012, 12:09
por Kakerlakk
PesTuga Escreveu:Mais um pequenino texto no 1ºpost. ;)
Pequenino não é sinónimo de insignificante.

Mais um excelente texto, continua a escrever! ;)

Re: In English

Enviado: 15 Jun 2012, 01:56
por PesTuga
Mais um texto, agora um pouco mais longo, no primeiro post. :)
Amanhã, ponho a tradução em português, para quem quiser e perceber melhor. ;)